Argumentative Essay

Hello everyone and welcome to Megat Nazhif Blog. For today’s class our class learnt how to write a Argumentative essay. This fourth time I learnt how to write a good essay from Miss Zu.  Before we start writing the argumentative essay, like usually Miss will divide us into group but for this essay she want individually. She says that she want to see us in writing a good essay. When writing an argumentative essay, remember to do the following:

Ø  Pick a well defined controversial topic

Ø  State clearly what your position is.

Ø  Offer between three or to five reasons or points to support your stand.

Ø  Provide sample support for your reasons

Ø  Present your arguments in an orderly manner                                                                               

This my essay example:                             

In Malaysia nowdays, we can see women that act like a guy or become bolder and aggressive in achieving their happiness. "The day will come when men will recognize woman as his peer, not only at the fireside, but in councils of the nation. Then, and not until then, will there be the perfect comradeship, the ideal union between the sexes that shall result in the highest development of the race." (Susan B. Anthony,n.d.) Although many people claims that nowadays women are becoming bolder and aggressive and men are more sensitive, but there are some people disagree with that statement because men was born to became a leader in family or country and women is needed to support men.

            There some who says that women is smarter and bolder than men because we can see that nowdays many women get accepted to university easily but men must struggle to get in the university. Because of this women highly think that they are better than men and they can achieve anything in this world. However, men is better than women in study and smarter and bolder than them is because men can control their emotion. If they can’t control their emotion it will affect their study or work. Men also can easily cooperate when their in the group and because of this men is suitable to lead women. “Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power.” (Abraham Lincoln).

            Besides that, they also some community thinks that women are bolder and aggressive when they in work because we can see that women intend to give bolder ideas in achiving a succesful life and sometimes they can be a little aggressive when work involve. And sometimes women thinks that men aren’t enough to adapt in diffcult situation because they are to sensitive. But they are also some people that think men is better when working because when men give a ideas and the ideas is not working, they will never give up and will try new solution to make a better. Not likes women that easily to give up when have to much pressure. “Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened” (Winston Churchill).

            Moreover, they also some people claim that women are bolder and aggressive because they can live without men in her life or she make her husband to work as a household and herself working because she thinks she is better than men and she can control men easily. According to self growth.com, in recent times, women have become bolder, aggressive and surer of themselves. They are no longer content in staying behind the shadows of their mates and husbands; rather they want to have a taste of power and success in their own . Nevertheless, they are some people thinks that men can do because men are born to lead and guide women to achieve a better life. As we can see nowdays men have higher position in the country because they have the abilities to guide the other into succesful life and women act as supporter to support the men. “Women may fall when there's no strength in men.” (William Shakespeare).

No matter how you look at it, men are better and bolder than women because they were born to become a leader and women is easily to be emotionally. You must agree that we can see it in our daily live or country that many the leader is a men and men can lead the organization into succesful and women help to support men. “Leadership is the desire and ability to inspire individual achievement, while a leader is just a guy at the top of the heap worried about his own” (Keith Mullen).